The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram given depicts the process of manufacturing of making
sugar
from sugar
cane. Overall
, there are 7 steps how
Change preposition
in how
sugar
is produced, starting from growing the sugar
cane and ending with drying and cooling.
To start with, the manufacture
has to grow the Replace the word
manufacturer
sugar
canes
for around 12 to 18 months. Afterwards, there are two kinds of harvesting Fix the agreement mistake
cane
sugar
, such
as with the tractor or manual by the peasant before the canes crushing into another machine which generate
a Correct subject-verb agreement
generates
juice
.
The next process is making juice
to be syrup with the evaporator, but the juice
have
to be filtered with Change the verb form
has
limestone
filter in the process of purifying Correct article usage
a limestone
juice
. In addition
, the evaporator has to set
on heat level. Add a missing verb
be set
Then
, the juice
is separated from the sugar
crystals in centrifuge
. After that, the results from Add an article
a centrifuge
the centrifuge
centrifuge
Correct article usage
the centrifuge
transfer
to the big can with the aim of drying and cooling to generate Add a missing verb
were transfer
a
Correct article usage
apply
sugar
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, juice with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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