The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from

sugar cane.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant
The diagram given depicts the process of manufacturing of making
sugar
from
sugar
cane.
Overall
, there are 7 steps
how
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in how
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sugar
is produced, starting from growing the
sugar
cane and ending with drying and cooling. To start with, the
manufacture
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has to grow the
sugar
canes
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cane
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for around 12 to 18 months. Afterwards, there are two kinds of harvesting
sugar
,
such
as with the tractor or manual by the peasant before the canes crushing into another machine which
generate
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generates
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a
juice
. The next process is making
juice
to be syrup with the evaporator, but the
juice
have
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to be filtered with
limestone
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a limestone
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filter in the process of purifying
juice
.
In addition
, the evaporator has to
set
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on heat level.
Then
, the
juice
is separated from the
sugar
crystals in
centrifuge
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a centrifuge
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. After that, the results from
centrifuge
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the centrifuge
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transfer
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were transfer
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to the big can with the aim of drying and cooling to generate
a
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apply
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sugar
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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