The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram given depicts the process of manufacturing of making

sugar

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from

sugar

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cane.

Overall

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, there are 7 steps

how

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sugar

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is produced, starting from growing the

sugar

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cane and ending with drying and cooling. To start with, the

manufacture

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has to grow the

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canes

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cane

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for around 12 to 18 months. Afterwards, there are two kinds of harvesting

sugar

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,

such

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as with the tractor or manual by the peasant before the canes crushing into another machine which

generate

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generates

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a

juice

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. The next process is making

juice

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to be syrup with the evaporator, but the

juice

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have

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to be filtered with

limestone

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a limestone

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filter in the process of purifying

juice

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.

In addition

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, the evaporator has to

set

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be set

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on heat level.

Then

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, the

juice

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is separated from the

sugar

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crystals in

centrifuge

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a centrifuge

the centrifuge

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. After that, the results from

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the centrifuge

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transfer

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were transfer

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to the big can with the aim of drying and cooling to generate

a

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apply

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sugar

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.