The maps show the park which was built in 1920 and current construction of the park.

The maps show the park which was built in 1920 and current construction of the park.
The two maps demonstrate two versions of Grange
Park
, its old construction in 1920 and its new current features. Considering the right side of the
park
, a notable change in the
garden
's sections is seen in the maps. On the right of the Eldon Street ,entrance the greenhouse is replaced by a water feature
along with
an additional entrance for underground car parking.
Moreover
, the pond for the plants and the rose
garden
on the right top corner of the old structure are substituted by a playing area and a cafe. Moving to the centre of the
park
, the northern and southern entrances remained unchanged.
However
, the middle part where the fountain existed in 1920 changed into a rose
garden
surrounded by seating areas. The left side of the
park
consisted previously of two separate rose gardens, a stage, and seating areas. Currently, it turned into one remaining rose
garden
in the top left corner and
amphitheatre
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an amphitheatre
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for concerts in the centre.
Overall
, the design of the
park
has changed significantly in today's structure, where the rose
garden
is the only section of the
park
that stayed in the new version with a noticeable reduction of its space.
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