The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
The given line graph describes the number of requested data from a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that the trends of requests for information by telephone and in person increased significantly over the periods, Linking Words
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the other figure shows the opposite.
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To begin
with, in January, people tended to use phone calls to ask for information from the tourists' department rather than sending a letter or electronic mail which accounted for approximately 1000. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the trend went up to 1600 in June. Another way to communicate with the tourist office remains the same the highest number of requested data in person was 2000 people Linking Words
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In contrast
, the number of requests for information using letters and emails decreased steadily from January to June. It started from 600 to 800 people at the beginning and ended up with only under 400 later.Linking Words
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