Every large city in the world is facing the problem of increasing traffic from the growing numbers of cars and other motor vehicles. what factors are responsible for the increase in traffic? How can this traffic problem be reduced?

The increasing business and population in metropolitan cities lead to the high vehicle demand nowadays,

as a result

Linking Words

,

traffic

Use synonyms

congestion is getting worse. I identify two factors which

leads

Change the verb form

lead

show examples

to increasing vehicle population. There are easy

instalment

Fix the agreement mistake

instalments

show examples

and

also

Linking Words

low

Use synonyms

tax

Fix the agreement mistake

taxes

show examples

.

Therefore

Linking Words

, the government should make a plan to mitigate that issues. There are two big problems why

traffic

Use synonyms

is getting complex.

To begin

Linking Words

with, the demand

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

cars or motorcycles is soaring over the years to support their economic activities,

while

Linking Words

banks and other creditors create a program

such

Linking Words

as easy instalments to gain address that trend. The easiness of credit instalments led to a boom in vehicle sales,

and

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

resulting in worse

traffic

Use synonyms

. Another point was cheap

tax

Use synonyms

from the government.

This

Linking Words

thing

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

the roots

why

Change preposition

of why

show examples

people

possesses

Change the verb form

possess

show examples

many cars and motorcycle in their home, so

this

Linking Words

factor exacerbates the

traffic

Use synonyms

congestion in every big city across the globe.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, two factors I identified to mitigate

this

Linking Words

situation is:

firstly

Linking Words

, the provisions and requirement of instalment have to

strictly

Add a missing verb

be strictly

show examples

set, and the creditor could make the required documents become more difficult and selective for

customer

Add an article

the customer

a customer

show examples

who wants to purchase a car or motorcycle.

Secondly

Linking Words

, the authorities could impose a progressive

tax

Use synonyms

if someone wants to have second or more cars.

For instance

Linking Words

, Singapore imposed high taxes and provisions for their citizen if they would like to buy a car. That policy is proven to reduce and prevent

traffic

Use synonyms

problems whilst

citizen

Fix the agreement mistake

citizens

show examples

are supported by

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

good public transportation. In conclusion, I identify that the easiness of instalment and cheap

tax

Use synonyms

that causes

traffic

Use synonyms

problems are more complex in metro cities.

Hence

Linking Words

, implementing strict provisions of instalments and

imposed

Wrong verb form

imposing

show examples

progressive

tax

Use synonyms

could reduce the problem above.