The number of people who are overweight or obese is far higher than in previous generation. What are the reasons for this, and How this problem be tackled.

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increasing rather than the older generation.

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the solution will be provided.

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with, a well-known cause resulting in the growing number of overweight persons is very closely linked to health-related

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including eating habits and

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practices.

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, today most of us need mostly a simple way of life and various alternatives to instant cooking, which in turns lead to the need for people to choose fast food.

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, the majority of workers tend to consume fast food as their daily breakfast. Compared to the previous generation, they were more likely to

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home-made foods.

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prefers fat-included foods which can exacerbate their

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, because of busy days, exercising had started to be diminished. Some believe that practising brain-related activities will consume a lot of their energy as

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doing sports is not needed anymore. Turning to possible solutions, health treatment would be the best way to overcome

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problem.

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could choose a medication for doctors who can provide a service, particularly for

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losing

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fat.

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, they could go to the nutritionist to alter their eating behaviour and arrange their daily nutrition to reduce their fat. Another possible long-term initiative is by changing attitude,

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, undertaking exercise every day.

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issue is a healthy lifestyle ranging from a habit of unhealthy food consumption and lacking

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performance.

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, I argue that the possible programs to handle

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problem are by promoting health check-ups for losing

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fat

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maintaining the content of foods. More importantly, if people could have regular

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exercise, they would become healthier and has less potential for obesity.