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You will be celebrating your son's 6 th birthday next week. you want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party.Write an invitation letter to this colleague.In your letter , invite your colleague to your son's birthday party,give details of the party and it's date and time , say how happy you and your family would be to have him/ her at the party.

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Hi Matty How are you
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 I hope your life is going great. You know, we have been working together for a long time, so soon will be my son's birthday and I going to celebrate it. I am inviting all my relatives, my friends and I would be so glad if you could come to the birthday. I am going to celebrate it at home
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30 th
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 April. If I'm not mistaken, two months ago, my colleagues and I came to my house and we did some work. Were you with us
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? if you have been with us, you probably remember my home address. If you haven't been and you don't know my address, here you go: Hilal
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 home. You have helped us a lot. That means the world to me You are
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 a member of our family. And we do not expect any gift from you. I look forward to you. Warm wishes Zafarbek
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structure
Ensure that your letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. This structure helps the reader follow your message more easily.
style
Try to maintain consistency in your writing style, including the use of formal or informal language, based on the context.
content
For future letters, consider including a brief RSVP request. This is a polite way to ask for your guest's confirmation, which is helpful for planning purposes.
tone
You've expressed a heartfelt invitation, highlighting the significance of the recipient's presence at your son's birthday party.
details
Providing details about the party, including the date, time, and location, is very helpful for the invitee.
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