The table describes the change of people who went for international travel in different areas in 19901995 2000 and 2005(In millions).Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table describes the change of people who went for

international travel in different areas in 19901995 2000 and 2005(In millions).Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table provides information about the rate of international travel in four
years
1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.
Overall
, the table indicated that the number of
people
travelling abroad are increasing over the
years
, with travelling rates reaching 693.7
million
travellers in 2005.  The highest visited places in all
years
are Europe, America, Asia and the Pacific.
People
's
numbers
who are visiting Europe increased gradually from 280.2
Million
in 1990 to about 400
million
in 2005. America,
however
, showed a stable rise in tourists reaching 118
million
in 2000,
then
dropped to about 113
million
in 2005. Aisa and the Pacific visitors
numbers
got doubled in the examined period by having 135.8
million
in 2005. The least commonly visited destinations are Africa and the Middle East. Both illustrated an increasing trend in the number of visitors. The number of
people
travelling to Africa grew by about 10%,
while
travellers to the Middle East rose slightly during the
years
by about 2
million
increase each year. In short,
people
's travelling
numbers
displayed a notable increase throughout the period. The main travelling destinations based on the highest
numbers
of tourists were Europe, America,
then
Asia and the Pacific.
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