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The table describes the change of people who went for international travel in different areas in 19901995 2000 and 2005(In millions).Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table describes the change of people who went for international travel in different areas in 19901995 2000 and 2005(In millions).Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table provides information about the rate of international travel in four
years
 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.
Overall
, the table indicated that the number of
people
 travelling abroad are increasing over the
years
, with travelling rates reaching 693.7
million
 travellers in 2005.  The highest visited places in all
years
 are Europe, America, Asia and the Pacific.
People
's
numbers
 who are visiting Europe increased gradually from 280.2
Million
 in 1990 to about 400
million
 in 2005. America,
however
, showed a stable rise in tourists reaching 118
million
 in 2000,
then
 dropped to about 113
million
 in 2005. Aisa and the Pacific visitors
numbers
 got doubled in the examined period by having 135.8
million
 in 2005. The least commonly visited destinations are Africa and the Middle East. Both illustrated an increasing trend in the number of visitors. The number of
people
 travelling to Africa grew by about 10%,
while
 travellers to the Middle East rose slightly during the
years
 by about 2
million
 increase each year. In short,
people
's travelling
numbers
 displayed a notable increase throughout the period. The main travelling destinations based on the highest
numbers
 of tourists were Europe, America,
then
 Asia and the Pacific.
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