A friend has offered you some work in this company. You are currently employed and not able to start for three months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: -Give details of what you know about his company. -Explain your current situation. -Give your answer to the offer and explain why.

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Dear Sam Tehranchi I hope everything is great and you have been well. Actually, I received your letter and I appreciate your suggestion.

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, I know about the company which is related to architecture and urban design. In terms of facilities and ,possibilities the company is really famous. In

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the majority of architects are well known in

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, these days I am working in the SRM

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which is located in the south of the city and it's next to my studio flat. Meanwhile, my contract with the SRM

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will be finished three months later.

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letter in order to say I cannot be in your

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. As a matter of fact, I can not participate in your company because of the location of the

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. To put it more simply, you are in the north of the city,

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my home is located in the south and it would be really difficult for me to join your architecture team. Thank you in advance for your suggestion, Best regards, Kambiz Pirzad

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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183 words

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