You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● tell him/her how you found out ● explain how you feel about the news ● organise to meet your friend for a celebration

Dear Navid, I just heard you and Maria have become engaged. I was in Majid's shop, and he told me about

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wonderful news. He told me about every detail. He mentioned how you suddenly purposed, so I believe that Maria was completely surprised. Because it was the first time one of my closest friends become engaged, I have a mixture of different emotions. Obviously, I am very happy about the news, but in a way, I think that there would be less opportunity to catch up in future, and

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disturbs me .

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, I want to share some great news. Majid, Ali, Sara and I decided to hold a party to celebrate your engagement. I know that your wedding

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to be for family only, so

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ceremony would be for friends only. Please tell me when is the best time for you. I'm looking forward to your response. Best regards Amir

amirghas92Sat May 20 2023

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● tell him/her how you found out ● explain how you feel about the news ● organise to meet your friend for a celebration

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people prefer to get up early and work in the morning. Others prefer to get up late and work until late at night. What do you prefer. Give reasons and examples to support your opinion