The table describes the change of people who went for international travel in different areas in 19901995 2000 and 2005(In millions). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table shows the number of people who travelled abroad in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.
The
overall
picture shows a general tendency to increase travelling, from each considered location.
For all continents and areas, apart from America, travellers'
number has progressively grown Change noun form
travellers
all
Correct determiner usage
apply
along
the given fifteen years. The total figures show that Change preposition
over
travellers
have passed from around 450 millions
in 1990 to Change to singular
million
little
more than 693 Correct article usage
a little
millions
in 2005. Specifically, Change to singular
million
the
most people whose international travel has increased are from Asia, with a more than doubled quantity.
On the one hand, Europe is the continent which hosts the most Correct article usage
apply
travellers
, both in 1990 and in 2005., and it is also
the area that has shown the lowest rise from 1995 to 2000. On the other hand
, America is the only continent whose travellers
have decreased from 2000 to 2005, going back to around the figure of 1995.
On the whole, the table demonstrates a Correct quantifier usage
number of travellers
general
positive trend for international travel.Change the adjective
generally
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