The table describes the change of people who went for international travel in different areas in 19901995 2000 and 2005(In millions). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The table shows the number of people who travelled abroad in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. The

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picture shows a general tendency to increase travelling, from each considered location. For all continents and areas, apart from America,

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number has progressively grown

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the given fifteen years. The total figures show that

travellers

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have passed from around 450

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in 1990 to

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more than 693

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in 2005. Specifically,

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most people whose international travel has increased are from Asia, with a more than doubled quantity. On the one hand, Europe is the continent which hosts the most

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, both in 1990 and in 2005., and it is

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the area that has shown the lowest rise from 1995 to 2000.

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, America is the only continent whose

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have decreased from 2000 to 2005, going back to around the figure of 1995. On the whole, the table demonstrates a

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positive trend for international travel.

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