The table describes the change of people who went for international travel in different areas in 19901995 2000 and 2005(In millions). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table describes the change of people who went for 

international travel in different areas in 19901995 2000 and 2005(In millions).

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table shows the number of people who travelled abroad in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. The
overall
picture shows a general tendency to increase travelling, from each considered location. For all continents and areas, apart from America,
travellers'
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travellers
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number has progressively grown
all
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along
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the given fifteen years. The total figures show that
travellers
have passed from around 450
millions
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million
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in 1990 to
little
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a little
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more than 693
millions
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million
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in 2005. Specifically,
the
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most people whose international travel has increased are from Asia, with a more than doubled quantity. On the one hand, Europe is the continent which hosts the most
travellers
, both in 1990 and in 2005., and it is
also
the area that has shown the lowest rise from 1995 to 2000.
On the other hand
, America is the only continent whose
travellers
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number of travellers
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have decreased from 2000 to 2005, going back to around the figure of 1995. On the whole, the table demonstrates a
general
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generally
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positive trend for international travel.
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