The table describes the change of people who went for international travel in different areas in 19901995 2000 and 2005(In millions). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The table shows the number of people who travelled abroad in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. The

overall

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picture shows a general tendency to increase travelling, from each considered location. For all continents and areas, apart from America,

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travellers'

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travellers

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number has progressively grown

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along

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the given fifteen years. The total figures show that

travellers

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have passed from around 450

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million

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in 1990 to

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a little

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more than 693

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million

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in 2005. Specifically,

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most people whose international travel has increased are from Asia, with a more than doubled quantity. On the one hand, Europe is the continent which hosts the most

travellers

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, both in 1990 and in 2005., and it is

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the area that has shown the lowest rise from 1995 to 2000.

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, America is the only continent whose

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travellers

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number of travellers

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have decreased from 2000 to 2005, going back to around the figure of 1995. On the whole, the table demonstrates a

general

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positive trend for international travel.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

162 words

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