The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows the
time
Australian Use synonyms
parents
spent helping their Use synonyms
children
with four different activities in 2013.
First of all, the figures show that Use synonyms
mothers
were much more involvedUse synonyms
,
when the Remove the comma
apply
children
got help from one single parent. Use synonyms
Mothers
spent most Use synonyms
time
helping their Use synonyms
children
with dressing, Use synonyms
whereas
less Linking Words
time
was dedicated to playing games alone with them. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, most hours invested by fathers Linking Words
was
related to homework, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
while
dressing was the activity they helped the less with.
Regarding the activities where both Linking Words
parents
were involved, playing games is at the first place, taking 70 per cent of their Use synonyms
time
, followed by dressing and preparing for bed, for which both Use synonyms
parents
spent Use synonyms
the
half of their Correct article usage
apply
time
. Playing games is Use synonyms
also
an activity that Linking Words
mothers
seem to prefer doing Use synonyms
together with
the father rather than alone, Linking Words
whereas
preparing for bed shows almost the same percentage for Linking Words
mothers
and for Use synonyms
parents
together.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
mothers
are surely more involved in spending Use synonyms
time
taking care of their Use synonyms
Use synonyms
children
needs.Change noun form
children's
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