Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. State whether you agree or disagree with these statements and support your point of view.

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In today's globalised world
internet
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huge role in human life. Some believe that computers supply
people
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with a lot of essential
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.
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that
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go gain much
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creats
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creates
problems. In
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issue and I will include my own viewpoint.
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internet
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nowadays is the
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invention. Using
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internet
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makes easier
people
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's life. Before accessing
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any
information
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people
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spend much time in libraries.
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, when I was
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I use to go to
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every weekend for my research. It
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me three or
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times to arrive there and back
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home and I can not relax,
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weekdays.
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, in order to find what book I need I have to explain
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and it was
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boring
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, in
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data we need is less than in Google. We can access any
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by
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one click without going out.
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,
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internet
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connect
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people
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all over the world. Individuals from different countries can keep in touch
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date gadgets. For
examle
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example
, after graduating
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from university
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university
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I lost contact with my
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groupmates. Thanks
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after ten years I can keep in touch with them.
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, in huge
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corporations
employees work
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without
going
work
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.
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the pandemic
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in many companies workers
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stayed
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internet
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. In
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conclusion
, summarizing all these points, I believe computers are our friends. If we use
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internet
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for
usefull
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useful
issues it will help us to reach our goal.
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, it connects us with our friends and
people
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who
far
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from us.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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