In many parts of the world children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Young people are provided more independence than in the

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years around the world. Nowadays

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is adjusting

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and

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of the community. I believe

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condition is positive for evolution. There are many benefits of

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enjoying more autonomy. Now

children

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come behind the global traditions which is the amalgamation of the excellent points of different

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of the world. Some

countries

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develop

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other

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. Because that country's youth have freedom. Most

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improve more rapidly because of

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of many oral ways of doing things and changing autonomous and more open communities.

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today's

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have the power of the internet and the space station TV in their hands .Today's

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are the most

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generation than ever

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the history of

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. They don't know what their parents and grandparents

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They have lots of opportunities in front of them

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they would like to survey. They conserve

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their decision and do

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hesitate

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on the path. They don't

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danger.

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in the past

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faced more

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their parents to various occupations. But today's

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are going into computer games and other sports

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.

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occasionally

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independent

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can be harmful

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juvenile

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. They like responsibility and can see

unusually

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of

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their actions.

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example

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someone

want

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to explain something to

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. But they don't want it. Because they are organized for independence. Freedoms should show in small steps so that the teens are prepared to advance forward having proven their talent to manage each small motion. Too much

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can end them in unfortunate company and

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narcotic.

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it can be repeated that

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adored

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by

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but the duty is on the parents to ready them for

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in small steps so that the detrimental edge of

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surfeit

freedom

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does not go hostile

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