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The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050.

The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population growth until 2050.
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The graph provides information about the rate of
population
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 increase in two countries
India
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 and
China
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. It
further
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 represents the projected expectations of
population
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 growth until 2050.
Overall
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, the graph indicated that the rate of
Indian
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population
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 kept an increasing trend throughout the
period
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,
while
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China
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's
population
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 rose in the first half of the
period
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, yet it is predicted to drop during the second half. On the one hand, the
population
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 in
India
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 began with less than 1000
billion
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 in 2000. The number kept rising by 100
billion
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 each passing year and is expected to meet the same number of people as
China
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 in the middle of 2025.
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,
this
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 growth will surpass
China
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's
population
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 rate afterwards to reach 1500
billion
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 people by 2050.
On the other hand
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,
China
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's
citizens
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 average started higher than
India
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's by 200
billion
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.
Nevertheless
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, the development in people's numbers is showing a slight change over the years. The highest
population
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 is expected to reach above 1400
billion
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 by 2025 and decrease in the following years to 1400
billion
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 by the end of the
period
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. In short, the
population
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 of
China
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 is higher than
India
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 in the first half of the
period
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. Meanwhile, the Indian
population
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 is predicted to grow significantly by 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, china, period, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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