Write about the following topic: Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Nowadays, one group

of

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assumes that taking the

responsibily

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responsibility

to organize some sports

events

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in your state is

benefical

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beneficial

for the country,

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others suggest that it leads to negative consequences. Despite the possible drawback

such

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as

increasing

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number of criminals,

i

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agree that conducting special sports

events

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is a good

achievment

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achievement

for the locals because of

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a wave

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of international tourists. On the one hand, worldwide tournaments, as a rule, always

atract

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attract

a lot of people from

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different countries. Fans are ready to travel to

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any place in the world in order to support their

favorite

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team or player.

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Moreover

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they always waste a lot of their finances to book a comfortable hotel room, to taste traditional dishes or to make a bet in the local casino,

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, a

countries

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budget is

increasing

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by

tourists

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tourists'

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taxes, which can be spent to develop medicine, infrastructure or education system.

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, After FIFA 2012, which had taken place in Brazil, their

year

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income increased

on

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approximately 65%, compared with 2011.

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hand

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a

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meaning

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that a lot of bandits follow

such

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events

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. Their opinion

based

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on the fact, that

football

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the football

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fans community contains a number of cruel

individual

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individuals

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, which organize fights and robberies, leading to the victims from locals.

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essay disagrees with

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argument because

government

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the government

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always improve their security system and police patrols before

start

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an event.

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, taking Brazil as an example again, which usually has a

hight

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criminal rate,

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during

the

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FIFA 2012 amount of

comitted

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committed

crimes have reduced because of a

nuge

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huge

number of police officers. In conclusion,

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essay

suggest

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that creating popular sports

events

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directly

into

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your county is profitable and leads to improving

a

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quality of

locals

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locals'

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lifes

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lives

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, but authorities should provide high-ranked security to protect citizens from possible vandals.