Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. as many as two thirds of children are now obese. schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. to what extent do you agree with thhis statement?

Good health is imperative for individuals regardless of age.

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there is an upsurge in obesity in young people, the issue is widely considered

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one of the most serious concerns among health experts. There is a

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of thought which says that educational institutes should be responsible for the

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of their students.

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, I do not agree with the fact, in my ,opinion it is the sole responsibility of parents. To commence with, the rapid growth of

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issue usually coincides with technological advancement. Since the industrial revolution, there is a trend in modern society for fast food,

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its easy access and urge of its taste, young people are often attracted to it.

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,

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prefer to have pocket money for lunch

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of taking lunch boxes from home.

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, the limited physical activities of students are

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the advent of technological devices like Mobile phones or computer games.

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,

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tend to spend only a limited amount of time in

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, and even if

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imposes a

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pattern on students still they could get fast food out of the

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premises. It is parents who should strictly monitor the timetable of children,

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should include the

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they take, and the amount of exercise they do. It is vital to have checks and balances on

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starting from

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age to avoid any fatal disease in the later stage of life.

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, a good timetable should include a healthy

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and outdoor activities.

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, parents should educate and push their

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towards more sports activities and

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make them aware of the drawbacks of eating unhealthy food.