Parents, usually mothers, give up work, choose to stay at home and look after families. Some people think that government should give them salary. Do you agree or disagree. Give reason from your own knowledge and experience.

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Some say that government should pay remuneration to the parents, normally mothers, who stop working for looking after their families.

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essay completely disagrees with

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statement because it will increase the burden on the nation’s funds, and it will encourage people to stay unemployed after they will become parents. Paying salaries to the people who have left their jobs for taking care of their families can have a huge impact on the country’s expenses.

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, many countries are already on the edge of a financial crisis,

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, any extra expense can lead to a serious economic crisis.

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, Canada has started paying salaries to those men or women who left their businesses or other earning opportunities for their children,

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, they faced a huge crisis.

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is why I believe that governments should not pay remuneration to them. Most of the individuals would prefer to stay jobless after having a child

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if they will get paid for it.

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is because, if the authorities would pay them for not working, it could lead to not working for a lifetime since they would prefer to earn money by staying at home.

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, New Delhi's government pays

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salaries to women,

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, it has been seen that there is a high surge in married women’s unemployment.

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is why I have the opinion that it can lead to chronic unemployment among married couples. In conclusion, I believe that these payments by the government should be avoided as it will increase the rate of unemployment and at the same time it could have devastating for the country’s economy.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Your opinion

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