Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In

this

era, there are a lot of folks who

work

overtime

hence

, they do not have enough

time

for their spare

time

. In my idea,

although

there are few merits for occupation over

time

, the negative aspects of that are far more. I would like to explain both sides of

this

position. On the one hand, one of the drawbacks of working more than standard is a decrease in the efficiency of employees if they do not have enough

time

for rest or leisure activities. From

this

point of view, many commentators justifiably argue that the percentage of mistakes by employees increases significantly if they do not have enough

time

for leisure activities. they believe the body and the brain need to be relaxed and relieved for recharging that the sufficient spare

time

brings that.

Furthermore

, another detriment of

that is

less communication with family or friends. Social problems may have some psychological diseases

such

as depression or isolation in the long run.

On the other hand

, there are those who subscribe to the view that economic problems are the chief cause for the worker that

work

more than duty. From

this

point of view especially in the developing country the standard wages of workers do not enough for them

consequently

they should more working prolonged hours.

For example

in Brazil the regular salary of a worker is 500$ per month

while

only the minimal cost of rental accommodation is more than 450$ per month,

therefore

the individuals have to

work

overtime. In conclusion, despite a few positive aspects of extra

work

such

as solving some economic issues, it seems to me, the drawbacks of them outweigh. Extra

working

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in the long run is

high

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likely to lead

health

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problems and social troubles.