Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?
In
this
era, there are a lot of folks who work
overtime hence
, they do not have enough time
for their spare time
. In my idea, although
there are few merits for occupation over time
, the negative aspects of that are far more. I would like to explain both sides of this
position.
On the one hand, one of the drawbacks of working more than standard is a decrease in the efficiency of employees if they do not have enough time
for rest or leisure activities. From this
point of view, many commentators justifiably argue that the percentage of mistakes by employees increases significantly if they do not have enough time
for leisure activities. they believe the body and the brain need to be relaxed and relieved for recharging that the sufficient spare time
brings that. Furthermore
, another detriment of that is
less communication with family or friends. Social problems may have some psychological diseases such
as depression or isolation in the long run.
On the other hand
, there are those who subscribe to the view that economic problems are the chief cause for the worker that work
more than duty. From this
point of view especially in the developing country the standard wages of workers do not enough for them consequently
they should more working prolonged hours. For example
in Brazil the regular salary of a worker is 500$ per month while
only the minimal cost of rental accommodation is more than 450$ per month, therefore
the individuals have to work
overtime.
In conclusion, despite a few positive aspects of extra work
such
as solving some economic issues, it seems to me, the drawbacks of them outweigh. Extra working
in the long run is Replace the word
work
high
likely to lead Replace the word
highly
health
problems and social troubles.Change preposition
to health
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