You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •explain the important event •apologies for the situation •suggest a new arrangement

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Dear MK, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to apologise as I won't be able to come to Canada soon and I have to make adjustments to the dates of my visit. Let me explain my situation, My sister will be getting married to her boyfriend soon . Actually, they surprised us and have decided to make their wedding party in two weeks which will contradict the date of the visit and I have to be with her on these days to help her as she is very busy and overwhelmed with the wedding arrangments and

also

she asked me to go with her to buy her wedding dress and as you know she is my little sister and I have to offer my help. I have decided to change the date of the flight ticket to be in a month

instead

of two weeks. I hope you will be free on that date. Once again I am so sorry about that and I hope you accept my apologies. see you in a month. Thank you. Iman

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6 paragraphs

183 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In today’s world, people spend a lot of money on appearance because they want to look younger. Why does this happen? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Today there is a great increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect to others. What are the causes of this? What measures can be taken to reduce this problem?

consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

Global warming is one of the biggest threat to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to solve this problem?

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