You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •explain the important event •apologies for the situation •suggest a new arrangement

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Dear MK, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to apologise as I won't be able to come to Canada soon and I have to make adjustments to the dates of my visit. Let me explain my situation, My sister will be getting married to her boyfriend soon . Actually, they surprised us and have decided to make their wedding party in two weeks which will contradict the date of the visit and I have to be with her on these days to help her as she is very busy and overwhelmed with the wedding arrangments and

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she asked me to go with her to buy her wedding dress and as you know she is my little sister and I have to offer my help. I have decided to change the date of the flight ticket to be in a month

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of two weeks. I hope you will be free on that date. Once again I am so sorry about that and I hope you accept my apologies. see you in a month. Thank you. Iman

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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183 words

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