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Every yeay several language die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages n the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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The extinction of
languages
 has occurred over the years
due to
 certain causes which is a problem for people associated with that
language
.
While
 many people do not consider it an issue saying that the world would be better with less number of
languages
. I disagree with the statement up to a great extent and intend to specify reasons.
To begin
 with,
Language
 is a major part of a culture or civilization
therefore
 when a
language
 dies it results in the end of civilization with time.
Then
, it becomes difficult for future generations to find their roots and learn their History.
For instance
, the Invasion of America by Europeans leads to the demolition of aboriginal
languages
due to
 which it is now difficult for historians to understand the
language
 of The great Mayan Civilization.
However
, Advocates of
such
 opinion say that the world has become a village so, It would be difficult for nations to communicate when
language
 becomes a barrier. Because some nations do not want to learn a
language
 which is globally used like English. But, It is not a valid point to let other
languages
 die. Because Science and Technology have done lots of efforts to translate
languages
 and it is now a game of seconds to know what a person says when he or she speaks another
language
.
For example
, applications like google translate coverts one
language
 to another immediately.
To conclude
, having a single global
language
 is not a bad idea but it does not mean everyone forgets their own mother tongue which connects to the roots.
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