You have seen an advertisement in Australian magazines for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child write a letter # Explain why you would like this # Give detail of why you are a suitable person to employ # Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter with respect to the advert which I have seen in a magazine for a nanny to watch over a six-year-old child and live with the family for six months. I will be delighted to have
this
job as I am currently on a break from school
while
waiting for my certificate and I am currently not occupied.
Also
, it would be a great addition to my experience with taking care of children seeing that
this
job relates to what I studied at the university. With the experience I have in taking care of
kids
being the first child and having several younger ones that I had to take care of. I found myself nurturing some of my younger siblings because my mother gave birth to them years after I was born.
Moreover
, during my years at the university, I was privileged to have worked in a nursery where I had hands-on experience in looking after
kids
.
Also
, I have a strong love for
kids
and enjoy their company. During my stay in Australia, I would be spending my leisure time taking courses online to help broaden my knowledge and I will be visiting the less privileged home to spend time with the
kids
. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Sandra
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