The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The map gives information about the
centre
of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its adoptions in the planned. It is important to note that school will not have any changes in the future.
The Islip town that has a main road right now will have a dual carriageway and the main road will be replaced with Pedestrians. Moreover
, shops in the north of the city will expand to a shopping centre
in a similar location also
, there will be a Bus station on the right hand of the Shopping centre
and a Car park on the left .
Furthermore
, Housing which is located in the south part of the map will be in several locations in the subsequent, one in the previous location another one under Shops with parks and a New housing next to the Car park in the East part of the town. Shops that are located in the centre
of the map will not have any changes in the future.Submitted by mirhashemim7 on
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