One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congesstion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

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congestion has become a major problem for each metropolitan

city

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nowadays. In

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essay, I intend to discuss apparent reasons for

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problem and some initiatives that could be taken by the public and authorities to tackle it. The issue of

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jams in big cities is

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several reasons. One prime reason is overcrowding,

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folks have started shifting to cities from suburban areas and

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the streets,

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and highways are always full of vehicles as everyone owns a vehicle in urban areas.

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, the

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are not enough or are not big enough to cater huge population and every

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is interconnected.

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whenever a person travels to a different

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they pass through the big cities which in result becomes the reason for jams.

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, Faridkot is a

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in Punjab and the main road has only 2 lanes which are supposed to be 5 or 6 to control the

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. To be stuck in vehicles has become very common and

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problem can be addressed in different ways. First of all, the government should improve public transportation; it should be affordable, comfortable, fast and safe. With

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, people will start opting for mass transit to travel

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, the number of cars running on

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could be reduced.

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, the government could implement a rule to drive cars of a certain number on particular days.

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, the Delhi ministry began a guideline in which cars ending in even numbers can be driven from Monday to Thursday only,

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car numbers ending in odd digits in the rest of the week.

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, pollution and blockage of

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because of vehicles are eradicated to a great extent as per a study. In conclusion, I believe that

traffic

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congestion occurs because of myriad reasons and can be solved if the public and government follow some rules.

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