One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congesstion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Traffic
congestion has become a major problem for each metropolitan
city
nowadays. In
this
essay, I intend to discuss apparent reasons for
this
problem and some initiatives that could be taken by the public and authorities to tackle it. The issue of
traffic
jams in big cities is
due to
several reasons. One prime reason is overcrowding,
that is
folks have started shifting to cities from suburban areas and
hence
the streets,
roads
and highways are always full of vehicles as everyone owns a vehicle in urban areas.
Secondly
, the
roads
are not enough or are not big enough to cater huge population and every
city
is interconnected.
Thus
whenever a person travels to a different
city
they pass through the big cities which in result becomes the reason for jams.
For instance
, Faridkot is a
city
in Punjab and the main road has only 2 lanes which are supposed to be 5 or 6 to control the
traffic
. To be stuck in vehicles has become very common and
this
problem can be addressed in different ways. First of all, the government should improve public transportation; it should be affordable, comfortable, fast and safe. With
this
, people will start opting for mass transit to travel
as a result
, the number of cars running on
roads
could be reduced.
Moreover
, the government could implement a rule to drive cars of a certain number on particular days.
For example
, the Delhi ministry began a guideline in which cars ending in even numbers can be driven from Monday to Thursday only,
while
car numbers ending in odd digits in the rest of the week.
As a consequence
, pollution and blockage of
roads
because of vehicles are eradicated to a great extent as per a study. In conclusion, I believe that
traffic
congestion occurs because of myriad reasons and can be solved if the public and government follow some rules.
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