Some people suggest that the
money
they spent on universe
research
has brought enormous benefits to
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, but it could invest in
another important projectsReplace the adjective
another important project
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. Personally, I totally agree with
this
statement.
Firstly
, investing
money
in researching
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space helps human have more experience and it
also
bringChange the verb form
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more knowledge about the universe
as well as
the things surrounding the place they
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. They can find out and
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more new things in
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space
such
as
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, the rest of the rocket or something else about the planets.
For example
, in the past, the first human, who set foot on the moon to
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or
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rocket and so on. All of
this
discovery will open
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mind and it play an important role in the
research
and develop science.
After
this
research
,
studentFix the agreement mistake
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will
also
learn more knowledge and they might be the next generation who can change the world.
On the other hand
, spending
money
on
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such
as
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,
factoryFix the agreement mistake
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,
entertainmentCorrect word choice
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might be better. Nowadays, many people prefer having a quality
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atChange preposition
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the present to worrying about the future. They only care about their family and the way to earning to their
liveReplace the word
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as well as
take care
forChange preposition
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their family. So many people get
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and they will find
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pleasure
toChange preposition
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entertainReplace the word
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.
Thus
, investing in
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will bring more benefits than spending
money
on space
research
.
In general, science is very significant but I think investing in the present will bring more benefits to mankind and it could be more usefully applied.