A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview.

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Dear sir, I hope you are well, I’m writing to apply for a job vacancy for waiters, in your restaurant. The

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day I visited the library, I saw the advertisement about that vacancy, I'm so excited. I waited a few months for that one. because my best friend works at your restaurant. Now I have finished my hotel school course. and nowadays I am working small restaurant as a waiter. I have worked there for 6 months.

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in my home town. I prefer to work in a nearby home. because I can work on time and In

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area, the transportation system is well organized.

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, I don’t have enough money spend to

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apartment.

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week, I do my work night shift. and I can attend the interview on Wednesday morning. if

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week hasn’t any requirement, you will send me an email. I am waiting for your reply. Dhanushka, Faithfully.

dhanushkalakmal19Sun May 19 2024

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Make sure to use proper punctuation and full stops to help readability.

coherence cohesion

Try breaking down the text into shorter paragraphs, each with a single idea for better coherence.

suitable writing tone

Ensure that the tone remains formal throughout the letter, avoiding conversational phrases.

task achievement

You provided all the information requested in the task: your current situation, your suitability for the job, and your availability for an interview.

coherence cohesion

The purpose of the letter is clear and easy to understand.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

157 words

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