A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview.

Dear sir, I hope you are well, I’m writing to apply for a job vacancy for waiters, in your restaurant. The
last
day I visited the library, I saw the advertisement about that vacancy, I'm so excited. I waited a few months for that one. because my best friend works at your restaurant. Now I have finished my hotel school course. and nowadays I am working small restaurant as a waiter. I have worked there for 6 months.
Firstly
, your
resturent
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restaurant
in my home town. I prefer to work in a nearby home. because I can work on time and In
this
area, the transportation system is well organized.
moreover
, I don’t have enough money spend to
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apartment.
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this
week, I do my work night shift. and I can attend the interview on Wednesday morning. if
this
week hasn’t any requirement, you will send me an email. I am waiting for your reply. Dhanushka, Faithfully.
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task achievement
Make sure to use proper punctuation and full stops to help readability.
coherence cohesion
Try breaking down the text into shorter paragraphs, each with a single idea for better coherence.
suitable writing tone
Ensure that the tone remains formal throughout the letter, avoiding conversational phrases.
task achievement
You provided all the information requested in the task: your current situation, your suitability for the job, and your availability for an interview.
coherence cohesion
The purpose of the letter is clear and easy to understand.
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