The money spent on space research has brought enormous benefits to mankind, but it could be more usefully applied. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, when technology has increased, people want to discover more about the world and
also
the universe
. As a result
, many governments spent much money
on space
research to bring enormous benefits to mankind. But for me, I just partly agree with it because that cash could be more usefully applied.
Firstly
, I will come up with why the space
discover
brought huge benefits to Replace the word
discovery
humans
. Most of money
for Add an article
the money
space
experience was spent for
building Change preposition
on
the
spaceships and satellites to discover the galaxy. As can be seen, experience outside the Earth is very hard but with the Correct article usage
apply
money
spent on it, many important information about our universe
are
sent to the Earth. Discovering Correct subject-verb agreement
is
space
can help humans
to know more about how everything around us were
created and what our Change the verb form
was
space
looks like. Moreover
, when our planet has to handle many effects like global warming or greenhouse effects which were created by mankind, as a result
, many scientists warn that our planet will be destroyed soon in the future. And the universe
Change noun form
universe's
explore
will bring Replace the word
exploration
humans
opportunities to find “another Earth” for our lives.
In
the other hand, I think that Change preposition
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money
spent for
Change preposition
on
space
discover
could be more usefully applied. As an example, there have been many accidents when researching Replace the word
discovery
universe
Correct article usage
the universe
such
as wrongly creating spaceships that also
lose money
and humans
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human
of
governments. Change preposition
apply
Along with
that reason, that amount of money
can be invested for
other fields like education, science and physics or concentrating more Change preposition
in
about
the environment around us to preserve our planet.
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on
To conclude
, spending money
on space
research can bring much important information to mankind but I think the governments also
should be
concentrate Unnecessary verb
apply
in
Change preposition
on
humans’
lives Change noun form
humans
of
their countries and Change preposition
in
also
habitats to protect our world.Submitted by nguyencamnhi on
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