The diagram illustrates various stages in the Aluminum recycle.
The diagram illustrates various stages in Aluminum recycling.
Overall
, there are seven stages in this
cycle, starting with collecting the used cans and ending with reusing recycled can as the final products.
At the first stage
in the cycle, people throw away the used can into the trash bin then
it gets collected by the garbage truck. In the next stage, they can be transferred to the factory for recycling, there, they are cleaned, sorted, and shredded before being compressed into small fragments. After that, the fragment is put in a melting pot for heating and melting down.
At the following stage, the molten aluminium is rolled into a 2.5-6mm thick roll, the roll later is reformed into a new can with the standard of 74% recycled in the Uk. Recycling can be used by people, and the cycle will start again.Submitted by phamnhung275 on
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