In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

‏In recent years, preserving

data

on networks has become a topic of ongoing debate. In previous decades people

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to save

information

in books. I will

further

this

discussion by

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some factors and illustrating the pros and cons. ‏

Firstly

, there are several advantages of keeping the

data

on the

internet

one of them being the availability feature, now you can access the

data

anywhere and anytime from any device.

Furthermore

researching specific

information

on the

internet

platform by clicking a button enormous of documentaries will appear

while

you sitting in your chair at the speed of light

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top of

it

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, it the time saving ,unlike the books which you have to search deeply

internet

provides

data

in milliseconds. Because of advanced technology every

knowledges

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knowledge

pieces of knowledge

bits of knowledge

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in your hand.

for example

, the Google platform,

although

there is debate about

information

validity,

that is

why no one can deny the utility. ‏

On the contrary

, a few critical drawbacks must be considered, hackers can reach to some

information

and alter

this

content . that could lead to ‏wrong

data

received by people, which ‏in turn resulted in ‏invalid

information

to the users .

Although

accessibility

considers

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a pros children can be in danger , Young people spend hours on their devices and without parents monitoring them could be exposed to sensitive content. As an example, ‏Some ads for children's apps can have hidden messages for sensitive ages. In order to, ‏the can receive a negative impact unless their parents are involved. ‏

Overall

, based on the above discussion having

information

on the

Internet

can be harmful. ‏All in all ,

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the appeal of storing knowledge on the network including the availability and accessibility, I consider that no one can deny the harmful and destroyed impact .