The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table describes the underground railway systems in six different cities.
As can be seen from the graph, the ages of the subway systems tend to be proportional to the length of its
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each year. London Underground, the oldest system, has the longest Change preposition
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route
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the second oldest one, Paris Railway, has the highest figure for commuters on a yearly basis.
In terms of the age of the railway system, London Underground was opened in 1863, recorded as the earliest one, followed by Paris and Tokyo. Linking Words
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Los
Angeles station was launched in 2001, which is the newest one among all the stations. Turning to the length of the Correct article usage
the Los
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, London Use synonyms
also
records the longest Linking Words
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whereas
Kyoto, which was opened in 1981, has the lowest length with 11 km.
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a whopping 1191 million passengers Linking Words
using
Paris station every year, which is the largest number of travellers Wrong verb form
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while
the figure for Kyoto's and Los Angeles 's passengers is 45 and 50 million per year, Linking Words
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