The pie charts below show the percentage of five types of food sold by a supermarket in 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given charts compare various types of food sold by a supermarket between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, meat and seafood were the most popular food in the supermarket in this
period.
Vegetables was
bought the most in 2003, which took up to a quarter, but in 2013, the proportion sold was declined to 23 per Change the verb form
were
cent
,
and became the second place. Meat began from 21 per Remove the comma
apply
cent
in 2003,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
increased to a quarter in 2013. Meat and seafood was
made up almost half Unnecessary verb
apply
sales
in the supermarket.
There was a growth in the sale of seafood, starting at just under a fifth in 2003 and Change preposition
of sales
rose
to over 20 per Wrong verb form
rising
cent
in 2013, when became third
Correct article usage
the third
popular
Correct quantifier usage
most popular
goceries
. Correct your spelling
groceries
Additionally
, the amount
of fruits Change the quantifier
number
also
climbed from 15 per cent
to 17 per cent
.
However
, the number of eggs sold had shown a downward in the decade, from a fifth in 2003 to only 14 per cent
in 2013.Submitted by zhangyongc83 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
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