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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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In recent years, the only issue
human kind
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 is facing worldwide
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 is the rise of its own population.
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the various reason for
this
 cause. Since most of the natural resource’s life water, food and fuel are in scarcity already, the rise in population is the greatest problem for humans.,
Firstly
,
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technological advancement in the healthcare sector is one of the main reasons for the reduction in the death rate globally.
This
 in – turn means that the demand for basic needs for our younger and future generation’s existence is unsure.
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 family planning in rural areas. To illustrate, in
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 era, a person is diagnosed
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 diseases like heart attack and cancer before even it could occur,
thus
 reducing the sudden death rate.
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, if
this
 situation persists the existence of humanity will be questionable
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 longer run. Unless every person
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 self-aware
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 consequences,
this
 will become a difficult situation to solve,
thus
 resulting in more and more deforestation in the name of housing; scientist
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 to find new ways to recycle resources to meet the growing needs.
In addition
, lots of unemployment might affect
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 economy. In conclusion,
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humans should be aware of the consequences the rising population might cause, so that we can mitigate it.
Although
this
 era is lucky enough to have
such
 advancement in medicine, which will prevent our near and dear one’s loss,
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 its advantages
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 its disadvantages to a greater
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