You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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to express my resentment regarding the quality of
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served during the meeting held on the 15th of May. My office colleagues have appreciated the hospitality that was provided by your staff.
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, they have
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mentioned in their feedback that the rooms were clean, and your staff has been respectful to our team members.
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, most of my peers pointed out the
food
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that was served during the afternoon. One of my colleagues mentioned that the non-vegetarian
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was not properly cooked and a few dishes were stinking. For our next meeting, to be held on 20th of May, I would strongly suggest that please inform your senior chefs about the quality of the
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.
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, I would recommend that you should
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supervise them during the whole time, It would be highly appreciated. Awaiting your prompt reply Yours Faithfully Jaskaran Singh Awal
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • therefore
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Compliments
  • Ambiance
  • Professionalism
  • Hospitality
  • Quality
  • Variety
  • Freshness
  • Catering
  • Menu options
  • Dietary requirements
  • Feedback
  • Survey
  • Collaboration
  • Improvements
  • Rectify
  • Gastronomy
  • Culinary
  • Hospitality industry
  • Client satisfaction
  • Constructive criticism
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