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The chart below show what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing thier undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below show what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing thier undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie chart provides information on students who studied at a University in Anthropology and the table chart gives data on the salaries of students who are anthropologists in the next five years after their graduation.
Overall
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, it can seem that the percentage of working full-time in anthropology was highest and the lowest was working in a part-time job with study in high education.
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, the table shows the different salaries in many types of jobs called, freelance consultants, working for the government and working in companies. To start with, anthropology graduates there were working in a full-time job at 52 per
cent
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. Followed by part-time jobs at 12 per
cent
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.
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, the proportion of full-time postgrad studies and not knowing what they are were similar at 8% and the percentage of graduates students who prefer to work for a part-time job with study only at 5%. For the salaries, the highest pay was working in the government there earn around 100,000$ in 50 per
cent
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 in five years.
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, the lowest pay was working in
the
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companies where only 30 per
cent
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 that there get in 100,000%

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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