The chart Below gives information about how families in one county spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.
The given table and pie chart illustrate the details of the police accounts between 2017 and 2018 in the same area of Britain. The table visualizes where the cash came and the pie charts visualize how it was allocated.
Overall
,the police budget increased significantly with National Government in both years.
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To begin
with,in 2017,local taxes had 91.2 Linking Words
million
£ which rose rapidly to 102.3 Use synonyms
million
£ and other sources in 2017 had 38 Use synonyms
million
£ and rose to 38.5 Use synonyms
million
£ ,which is 0.5 more than the previous year.Use synonyms
Furthermore
,the majority of money was sourced by National Government with an increase from 175.5 up to 177.8 Linking Words
million
£. The total of all budgets in 2017 rose significantly from 304.7 to 318.6 Use synonyms
million
£ in 2018 ,with the largest growth by local Taxes.
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firstly
consisted of salaries,which was the biggest amount of spending,Linking Words
whereas
the proportion of Linking Words
this
decreased from 75% to 69% in 2017 and 2018 respectively. Linking Words
However
, spending money on technology almost doubled from 8% to 14%
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whereas
building and transport remained unchanged at 17%.Linking Words
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