The chart Below gives information about how families in one county spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.

The chart Below gives information about how families in one county spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.
The given table and pie chart illustrate the details of the police accounts between 2017 and 2018 in the same area of Britain. The table visualizes where the cash came and the pie charts visualize how it was allocated.
Overall
,the police budget increased significantly with National Government in both years.
To begin
with,in 2017,local taxes had 91.2
million
£ which rose rapidly to 102.3
million
£ and other sources in 2017 had 38
million
£ and rose to 38.5
million
£ ,which is 0.5 more than the previous year.
Furthermore
,the majority of money was sourced by National Government with an increase from 175.5 up to 177.8
million
£. The total of all budgets in 2017 rose significantly from 304.7 to 318.6
million
£ in 2018 ,with the largest growth by local Taxes. Payments,
firstly
consisted of salaries,which was the biggest amount of spending,
whereas
the proportion of
this
decreased from 75% to 69% in 2017 and 2018 respectively.
However
, spending money on technology almost doubled from 8% to 14% ,
whereas
building and transport remained unchanged at 17%.
Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Budget allocation
  • Consumer spending
  • Expenditure trends
  • Historical comparison
  • Economic context
  • Inflation adjustments
  • Financial priorities
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spendings
  • Essential necessities
  • Luxury items
  • Technological advancement
  • Income distribution
  • Fiscal habits
  • Societal norms
  • Budgeting differences
  • Monetary trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Spending categories
What to do next:
Look at other essays: