The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007
The pie charts illustrate the main reasons that humans came to and left the UK in 2007 . At first glance,
it is clear that
the main factor influencing
this
decision was employment . Having a definite job accounted for 30 per cent of immigration to the UK . And
this
figure was very similar for
emigration
, at 29% . Looking for work accounted for 22% of
emigration
from the UK , though the proportion of people leaving the United Kingdom for
this
purpose was a minority, at 12% . A large number of the population,
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26% ,
also
immigrated for formal study , but a very small number of people,
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4%, left the United Kingdom for
this
purpose . The proportions of those moving to join a family member were so quite similar for
emigration
and immigration, at 13% and 15% respectively . Almost a third number of the community (32%) gave 'other' reasons or no reason for
emigration
,
this
accounted for only 17% with regard to immigration.
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