The Graph Below Shows The Proportion Of Four Different Materials That Were Recycled From 1982 To 2010.
The line graph illustrates recycled materials
such
as paper
and cardboard, glass
containers
, alumininium
cans and Correct your spelling
aluminium
plastics
during the period, from 1982 to 2010
Overall
, four different reusable goods were
showed Unnecessary verb
apply
finally
increased per
cent points than their initial points.
In 1982, there were only two types of recycling things, respectively Change preposition
apply
paper
with cardboard and glass
containers
. Compared to two
things, Correct article usage
the two
paper
and card board
started at Correct your spelling
cardboard
the
higher point than Correct article usage
a
glass
containers
, it was around 15 per cent higher than other
. From Fix the agreement mistake
others
in
1986 Change preposition
apply
and
Correct word choice
apply
in
1990, Change preposition
to
alumininium
cans and Correct your spelling
aluminium
plastics
were respectively begun to recycle. The alumininium
and Correct your spelling
aluminium
plastics
were started at the lowest point among other recycled materials, they were between 0 to 10 percent
, but they were increased continually. Change the spelling
per cent
The
Correct article usage
Paper
paper
and cardboard showed increased shapes from 1982 to 1986 and from 1990 to 1994. However
, except these
periods, it continually decreased, but it Change preposition
for these
was
occupied the Unnecessary verb
apply
majorty
proportion of recycling throughout all periods.
Correct your spelling
majority
Glass
containers
towarded
downward, from 50 Correct your spelling
toward
towards
percent
to 40 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
however
, it rebounded and peaked at 60 per cent. Alumininium
cans significantly went up, Correct your spelling
Aluminium
started
at 5 % and Wrong verb form
starting
then
ended
up at 45%. Wrong verb form
ending
In addition
, plastics
were
steadily increased, but it always recorded between 0 to 10 Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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