The Graph Below Shows The Proportion Of Four Different Materials That Were Recycled From 1982 To 2010.
The line graph illustrates recycled materials
such
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paper
and cardboard, Use synonyms
glass
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containers
, Use synonyms
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alumininium
cans and Correct your spelling
aluminium
plastics
during the period, from 1982 to 2010
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Overall
, four different reusable goods Linking Words
were
showed Unnecessary verb
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finally
increased Linking Words
per
cent points than their initial points.
In 1982, there were only two types of recycling things, respectively Change preposition
apply
paper
with cardboard and Use synonyms
glass
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containers
. Compared to Use synonyms
two
things, Correct article usage
the two
paper
and Use synonyms
card board
started at Correct your spelling
cardboard
the
higher point than Correct article usage
a
glass
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containers
, it was around 15 per cent higher than Use synonyms
other
. From Fix the agreement mistake
others
in
1986 Change preposition
apply
and
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apply
in
1990, Change preposition
to
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alumininium
cans and Correct your spelling
aluminium
plastics
were respectively begun to recycle. The Use synonyms
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alumininium
and Correct your spelling
aluminium
plastics
were started at the lowest point among other recycled materials, they were between 0 to 10 Use synonyms
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percent
, but they were increased continually. Change the spelling
per cent
The
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Paper
paper
and cardboard showed increased shapes from 1982 to 1986 and from 1990 to 1994. Use synonyms
However
, except Linking Words
these
periods, it continually decreased, but it Change preposition
for these
was
occupied the Unnecessary verb
apply
majorty
proportion of recycling throughout all periods.
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majority
Glass
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containers
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towarded
downward, from 50 Correct your spelling
toward
towards
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percent
to 40 Change the spelling
per cent
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percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
however
, it rebounded and peaked at 60 per cent. Linking Words
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Alumininium
cans significantly went up, Correct your spelling
Aluminium
started
at 5 % and Wrong verb form
starting
then
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ended
up at 45%. Wrong verb form
ending
In addition
, Linking Words
plastics
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were
steadily increased, but it always recorded between 0 to 10 Unnecessary verb
apply
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percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, glass, containers, alumininium, plastics, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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