In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays, agriculture sector development is getting better as we can see through the news.
Nevertheless
, we still can find hunger in particular
places at the moment. There are many issues that
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this
problem, but two major problems are the
postharvest handling and Correct article usage
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the
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food
distribution
.
The first reason of
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world hunger is because Correct article usage
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the the
postharvest is not handled properly so the Correct article usage
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food
become spoil
and people can’t consume it. Wrong verb form
spoiled
Food
is super easily spoiled because of the environment or even the microorganism in or around it. Those factors need to adjust so that we can prevent the
spoilage and there is no Correct article usage
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food
waste. For example
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commodity need
to be stored Change the verb form
needs
at
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in
the
dry places so Correct article usage
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the
fungi can’t grow inside the peanut. Correct your spelling
that
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peanut
can Fix the agreement mistake
peanuts
be sell
and Change the verb form
be sold
consume
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consumed
then
.
The second reason is the
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that
food
distribution
isn’t spread widely for people who deserve it. Implementation of food
distribution
policy has great
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the great
a great
district
doesn’t have proper land to grow food
so food
from outside district
or even abroad is needed to fulfill their life necessity. Correct article usage
the district
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government
. Government need to provide Correct article usage
the government
food
for example
they can send tonnes of carbohydrates
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carbohydrate
unwealthy
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the unwealthy
district
.
To conclude
, hunger is the effect to
improper postharvest handling and Change preposition
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unwide
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unwise
unwind
food
distribution
which can be solved by good handling practices and government policy to give food
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for Fix the agreement mistake
subsidies
particular
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a particular
district
.Fix the agreement mistake
districts
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