In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays, agriculture sector development is getting better as we can see through the news.
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, we still can find hunger
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places at the moment. There are many issues
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related to
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problem, but two major problems are
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postharvest handling and
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food
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distribution
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. The first reason
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world hunger is because
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postharvest is not handled properly so the
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become
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and people can’t consume it.
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is super easily spoiled because of the environment or even the microorganism in or around it. Those factors need to adjust so that we can prevent
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spoilage and there is no
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waste.
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, in the production of peanut,
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commodity
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to be stored
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dry places so
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fungi can’t grow inside the peanut.
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quality
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peanut
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and
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safely
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. The second reason is
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food
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distribution
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isn’t spread widely for people who deserve it. Implementation of
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policy has
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responsibility of it. Some
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doesn’t have proper land to grow
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so
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from outside
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or even abroad is needed to fulfill their life necessity.
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should be the duty of
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. Government need to provide
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they can send tonnes of
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sources for
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district
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, hunger is the effect
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improper postharvest handling and
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food
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which can be solved by good handling practices and government policy to give
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subsidy
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for
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district
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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