You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you are going to do work experience. In your letter • thank the manager for the opportunity to do work experience • explain what you hope to learn from the work experience • ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in regard to your organisation. I would like to thank you for

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opportunity of working in your organisation for three months. I am felling so grateful for having

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opportunity and I am ready to work very hard and learn as much as I can. As you may know, I am studying to become a vet and I will be finishing my degree next year. As your organisation rehabilitates injured animals and returns them to the wild, I will gain a great experience in how to look after them, and that would be very helpful for my future career. I would love to have in the future a sanctuary where injure animals can be recovered before being in their habitats again. I have some questions and I believe that you may be able to answer them. In the contract was not very clear if the accommodation will be provided or if I will have to find my own place.

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, I was wondering if the length of the work preiod could be extended to one more month, as I would love to stay longer than three months. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you in advance. Kind regards, Jimena

jimeilariaMon Oct 21 2024

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task achievement

Ensure the introduction clearly mentions the purpose of the letter.

coherence cohesion

Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea for clarity.

task achievement

The letter addresses all parts of the task, providing gratitude, explaining learning goals, and asking questions.

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The formal tone is appropriate for a letter to a manager, maintaining professionalism throughout.

coherence cohesion

The use of paragraphs helps in organizing the letter well, making it easier to follow.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

213 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

appreciative
hands-on experience
skill enhancement
networking opportunities
mentorship
organisational structure
company ethos
onboarding process
professional development
collaborative environment
shadowing
logistics
corporate attire
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