The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The given table presents how many people visited Ashdown Museum throughout the

year

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before and the

year

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after it was refurbished. The pie charts display

visitors

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visitors'

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satisfaction level with their visit, during the same periods, which was identified through surveys. As seen in the table the

number

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of visitors increased during the

year

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after

refurbishment

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. If during the

year

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before

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refurbishment

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,refurbishment

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number

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of people who visited Ashdown Museum was 74000, so throughout the

year

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after

refurbishment

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these statistical data goes up to 92000. Comparing the given pie charts makes clear that the total

number

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of visitors who

was

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very satisfied and satisfied increased during the

year

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after

refurbishment

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.

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the

number

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of respondents who conclude that they were dissatisfied and very dissatisfied decreased. Only the

number

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of people who didn’t answer

to

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apply

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this

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question remained without changes.