The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The given table presents how many people visited Ashdown Museum throughout the
year
before and the year
after it was refurbished. The pie charts display visitors
satisfaction level with their visit, during the same periods, which was identified through surveys.
As seen in the table the Change noun form
visitors'
visitor's
number
of visitors increased during the year
after refurbishment
. If during the year
before refurbishment
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,refurbishment
number
of people who visited Ashdown Museum was 74000, so throughout the year
after refurbishment
these statistical data goes up to 92000.
Comparing the given pie charts makes clear that the total number
of visitors who was
very satisfied and satisfied increased during the Change the verb form
were
year
after refurbishment
. Whereas
the number
of respondents who conclude that they were dissatisfied and very dissatisfied decreased. Only the number
of people who didn’t answer to
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apply
this
question remained without changes.Submitted by ronadeclaro on
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