The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.
The chart underneath appears the method of squandering
paper
reusing.
In general, it is clear that
there are six distinct stages in this
process, from the initial collection of waste paper
to the eventual production of usable paper
.
The process begins with the paper
recycling process, waste paper
is collected either from paper
banks, where members of the public leave their used paper
, or directly from businesses. This
paper
is then
sorted by hand and separated according to
its grade, with any paper
that is
not suitable for recycling being removed. After that, the graded paper
is transported to a paper
mill.
After cleaning and removing unsuitable or unstable material de-inking of paper
begins which removes inks and glues the paper
. Finally
, the writing paper
moves into the last
stage for the paper making
machine, and it is interesting to note that Add a hyphen
paper-making
paper
will be manufactured according to
the demand for usable wrappers.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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