The maps illustrate the Islip town center now and how it would be changed in the future.

The maps illustrate the Islip town center now and how it would be changed in the future.
The maps illustrate the Islip town
center
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now and how it would be changed in the future.
It is clear that
the big change to the town will be the construction of the ring
road
around the
center
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. Some other developments with regard to
shops
and housing will accompany the building of
this
road
. The places in the south seem to stay unchanged. The school continues to be located at the same place - next to the housing and outside the carriage gate, but it will be expanded. The housing will remain nearly the same, with the new
road
near there. There is a big change in the
center
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of the town’s
center
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in
the
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plan. The rows of
shops
along the main
road
will be changed. The
shops
in the south will still remain. New housing will be built near the park, inside the carriageway, next to the old housing. The main
road
will be replaced by a pedestrian way. The
shops
in the North will be demolished, and
it
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will be converted into an area for people’s daily activities, including
bus
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a bus
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station, shopping
center
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, carpark, and new housing.
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