All cars that burn fossil fuel should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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benifits

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cars

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runing

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running

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. I will totally disagree with the statement. First and

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, it can be very difficult to replace electric

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with other

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in a go means that in a single day. Because the budget is

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it will badly impact that customer.

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effected

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fast changing

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, in our country, the

electicity

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big failure.

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, petrol,

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possible to gather for

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mode rapid change will impact

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where there is no electricity

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, how a person can charge it's

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? And in

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situation,

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can be helpful because it is easily available and refilled within no time unless the petrol stations

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number of gathering of

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fossil

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engines are harmful

for

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our life and nature. But

cars

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with harmful gases should be reduced not totally banned. Poor

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cannot arrange electric

vehicle

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but rich

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can afford electric

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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All cars that burn fossil fuel should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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some people think that sports involving violence such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree?

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