IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

1.You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter oexplain why you changed jobs – o describe your new job – o tell him/her your other news –

#work #company #friend #oexplain #jobs #job #news
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Dear Juliet I hope you and your family are well. I didn't regret spending time with you
last
 week. I'm writing to let you know that I've left my previous
campaign
 and started a new
campaign
 . You knew that I worked on the "Gulzor"
campaign
, and I told you that I was looking forward to changing my
job
.
last
 month I changed my
job
 and started working on a tourism
campaign
.
this
 work is very interesting. In my previous
job
, I worked long hours and the salary was low.So I applied for a new
campaign
.
This
campaign
 is
also
 looking for talented young workers and I took advantage of
this
 situation. I was a little nervous during the interview, but it went away quickly because I'm good at talking to people. Seeing my enthusiasm, they hired me as a
campaign
 manager.For me, the best part of working in
this
campaign
 was the conditions, very comfortable rooms, and weekly trips to different countries,
this
job
 was one of my dreams. most importantly the salary is very good. I demonstrate my skills with all my enthusiasm at work. He gave me 4 tickets to Italy for my good work in the
campaign
. I gave these tickets to my family, they are going on a trip next week. Best wishes Sevinch
Submitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: