1.You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter oexplain why you changed jobs – o describe your new job – o tell him/her your other news –

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Dear Juliet I hope you and your family are well. I didn't regret spending time with you

last

week. I'm writing to let you know that I've left my previous

campaign

and started a new

campaign

. You knew that I worked on the "Gulzor"

campaign

, and I told you that I was looking forward to changing my

job

last

month I changed my

job

and started working on a tourism

campaign

this

work is very interesting. In my previous

job

, I worked long hours and the salary was low.So I applied for a new

campaign

This

campaign

also

looking for talented young workers and I took advantage of

this

situation. I was a little nervous during the interview, but it went away quickly because I'm good at talking to people. Seeing my enthusiasm, they hired me as a

campaign

manager.For me, the best part of working in

this

campaign

was the conditions, very comfortable rooms, and weekly trips to different countries,

this

job

was one of my dreams. most importantly the salary is very good. I demonstrate my skills with all my enthusiasm at work. He gave me 4 tickets to Italy for my good work in the

campaign

. I gave these tickets to my family, they are going on a trip next week. Best wishes Sevinch

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

218 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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