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People are becoming famous with the help of TV programme and the internet.  Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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There is no doubt that these days , more and more
people
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famous because of an
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 number of
TV
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show
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shows
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 or the spread of using social media among individuals . The question is , what are the positive and negative sides of becoming
known
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a known
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 person ¿ In
this
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advantages
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 side of
Tv
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 shows and the internet helps
people
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 become familiar
.
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 The main reason to support
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 claim is that nowadays
Tv
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 shows and social applications are considered
one
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of
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special
career
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careers
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 with a high income so most
people
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 attempt to be famous through
tv
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 and social platforms . To illustrate , most celebrities say that , if you looking for any
influncer
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influencer
influence
 on social media you will know he or she earns
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double income compared with any actor
works
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who works
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 in
hollywood
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 that
why
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is why
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 most
people
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 tend to become famous.
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, most producers prefer to bring
any
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blogger's
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bloggers
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 from
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social to
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tv
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the tv
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show
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shows
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 because they will increase the rate of
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show
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the show
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as well as
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 increase the profit of
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tv
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the tv
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show
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.
On the other hand
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 , there are plenty downsides of
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 the number of famous
people
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 .
Firstly
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 ,
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people's
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people
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 will incline to
concer
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concern
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about
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 how to become famous and ignore another side of
they
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their
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life
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.
For example
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, most of
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the youngestres
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youngestres
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youngsters
 think that the easiest way to gain a lot of money is to be a known person so they
failure
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 to be successful
of
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in
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 their
works
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work
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 or
schools
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school
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. In conclusion, we could say
that is
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 not easy to become
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famous even if you earn
alot
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a lot
 of dollars , you should be
responsible
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a responsible
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 and
respcted
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respected
 person with a high molar front
the
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 public .
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