In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advanatages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In recent years , in some ,cultures children want to be independent and they think if they work hard they can achieve what they want . In

this

,essay I will discuss the benefit and drawbacks of

this

situation . There are lots of advantages . One of them , children will learn many things when know bodies help them .

Such

as being independent . When they arrive at what they want they will feel proud of themselves more than when someone helps .

For instance

, my sister wanted to open a small shop and she tries to work full-time in a restaurant to earn some money and she did it alone . Now when she buys anything she knows how to spend it .

However

, there are disadvantages.

Firstly

, many kids are overacting. When they fail they stay at home for one month or over . And

this

point brings diseases

such

as depression.

Additionally

, it is not healthy for the brain .

secondly

, a few parents put pressure on the child to study and the child wants to succeed in the exam , but when they didn't get high marks . He suicide attempt. In conclusion , children will learn mount of information when they try hard alone ,but there are drawbacks that should their parents teach them

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