Describe graph that shows the use of internet and computers in the Arab world.

Describe graph that shows the use of internet and computers in the Arab world.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for Describe graph that shows the use of internet and computers in the Arab world.
This
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graph shows the
number
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of
computers
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and the
Internet
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in the Arab world.
Overall
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, the
number
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of the
Internet
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is higher than
computers
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in each country, and the UAE is the highest
number
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of using technology,
while
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Egypt and Morocco have the same trend regarding the
number
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of
computers
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and the
Internet
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. First of all, using the
Internet
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in the UAE, Oman, Lebanon, and Jordan is higher than in
computers
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with 40, 75, 25, and 345 per 1000 inhabitants respectively. Two countries Egypt and Morocco are the least trend using
computers
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with 10 of 1000 residents and followed by Syria with 15 using
computers
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and
also
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the least trend using the
internet
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.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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of
computers
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in Kuwait, Saudi Arabia, and Syria is higher than the
internet
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with 125, 65, and 20 respectively,
however
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, the
number
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of
computers
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and
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internet
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Internet
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that are used in UAE is still the highest in the Arab world.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, computers, internet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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