Write a letter to your manager about your work from last year. What you did. What you think you could improve? A training request.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my previous achievements which I did through hard work and honesty.
Primarily, I am Eva Smith, and working as an Account Manager at IBM company for the last
three years. I did a lot of hard job to achieve success in an organization such
as improving the productivity of the company as well as
how to manage the accounts effectively. Through this
task spirit, I achieved a higher position in the corporation.
Furthermore
, I think, I could my performance was excellent but something which needs to be improved intellectually as well as
in communication skills because of this
, I want to improve my professional effort and will create the ideal image in front of my junior colleagues.
Finally
, I want to take permission regarding training that helps to manage data in modern ways in addition
, during this
class information I will help to earn the name and fame of a company in the business world.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Eva Smith.Submitted by rajveersra55 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite