You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion. You should write at least 250 words

Developed countries have more exposure

toward

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technology and they are using these advanced techniques to train their sportsmen to achieve maximum skills

while

other countries do not have

such

facilities.

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essay will elaborate on its important and some detrimental effects. As far as my opinion is concerned it affects the merit of sports.

To begin

with,

providig

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providing

extra

skill

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skills

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by investing more is important to win the

maga

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mega

events. To explicate it, in the world, there is a

alot

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a lot

lot

of

compitition

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competition

among the

players

, everyone is trying to attain

maximan skil

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maximum skill

, so if a nation is utilizing more

advance

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technique

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techniques

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to grow their

players

it is justifiable because they are using

trick

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and ways to train them in front of all. It's not something

that

is hide

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. For

instant

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, in Pakistan cricket

players

were trained with the help of using different technology and even some time, they sent

them

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in

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the camp

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army

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, where they got proper

treatement

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treatment

to make themself healthy.

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, it is the need of hours to make some extra

effert

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effort

to

compeate

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compete

the world. To commence with, unequal distributions of resources among the athletes create unfair

compitition

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competition

. To illustrate it, more

train

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players

will

definately

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definitely

perform well because they

knows

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all the trick, and

well

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aware,

how

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to encounter

with

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the pressure of

game

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.

Thus

, it is very important to provide them with equal opportunities, so that

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standered

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standard

of sport should

be maintain

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. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying, both

the

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viewpoints are discussed with relevant arguments.

However

, I personally, subscribe to the view that

for

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to make healthy

compitition

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competition

in sports, it is important to provide them with equal facilities.