The pie charts below show the proportions of visits to Ireland last year by age group, and by gender and type of visit.
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chart
illustrates the amount
of visitors in Ireland Change the quantifier
number
recent
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years
age
group
, by sex and kind
of visit.
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by kind
Overall
, it can be seen that people in age
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the age
group
between 25 and 54 takes almost a
half of Correct article usage
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chart
and the majority of public visits Correct article usage
the chart
with
leisure purpose.
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in
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between
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the age
an age
age
of 25-34 and 45-54 have the highest figure of 23%. Fix the agreement mistake
ages
In contrast
, 0-15 years have the lowest percentage of 6%. In other
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another
illustration
we can see that 83 Add a comma
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percent
of visitors have leisure aims and only 4% of females have business visits.
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per cent
age
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the age
group
of 35-44 takes second place with 19%, moreover
, the groups of 16-24 years have exacly
the same figure as Correct your spelling
exactly
age
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the age
group
of 66 and over which is eighteen percent
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per cent
furthermore
, people in age
of 55-64 gets Add an article
the age
an age
last
11% of pie
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the pie
a pie
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. In the second chart
we left the Add a comma
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last
proportion of male visitors that have business goals with index
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an index
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