Films can have effect on children’s education and teach them many things. Do you think it is always a positive influence. Discuss.
Movies
can have an effect on children’s studies as well
as
they can gain knowledge from them. Correct word choice
and
This
esay
will disagree with Correct your spelling
essay
this
statement because they try to imitate the actions in films
and it leads to serious injuries, and the adult scenes
in movies
can have a detrimental effect on their minds and education
.
Many movies
have action scenes
, and some boys and girls try to copy them, which leads to injuries. In other words
, action scenes
are performed under an expert’s supervision, further
, many actions are performed by trained stuntmen with proper safety measures. For example
, after watching The Avengers many young people tried the action scenes
that have resulted in multiple accidents and deaths. Therefore
, I have a strong opinion that movies
teach the wrong things to children.
Furthermore
, many films
contain scenes
that are not meant for those below 18 years old. That is
to say, children watch films
from various sources such
as Netflix and Youtube
, and if their parents don’t control these applications, they might watch these Correct your spelling
YouTube
scenes
and it can impact their minds and education
. For example
, Although
Krish
movie was meant for offspring, it had numerous Change noun form
Krish's
scenes
which were not meant for children. Hence
, I believe that movies
can be detrimental to the younger generation’s education
.
In conclusion, films
can have a negative impact on the younger generation’s education
and they can acquire bad knowledge from them because movies
contain scenes
that are made for adults at the same time they can imitate some actions which can lead to injuries or even deaths.Submitted by KaranAwal15 on
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